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“Just one kiss, sensei.”

He looked away from her.

Belatedly she corrected herself. “Kakashi.”

She reached out to lay her hand over hers, only for him to pull it out of her reach. It hurt, but then she was used to getting hurt by all sorts of people so she tried not to let it show on her face. Even so, it must have shown, because a pang of regret pinched Kakashi’s brow and he lifted that same hand he’d withdrawn to tuck a stray pink lock behind her ear. He cupped her head; his hand large enough to span across her neck to both curl his fingers around her nape and rest his thumb on her jaw. Sakura’s heart leapt into her throat as she saw a familiar expression dawn on his face – the same one she’d seen in the forest after he’d tried to force-feed her a mushroom. The same distant hunger was there, as if the only thing that mattered in the entire universe at that moment was Sakura.

Then with a light tug, he pulled her forward and leant in to kiss her… on the corner of her mouth.

It was a kiss that contained a strange mixture of innocence and intimacy that she’d never felt before. She could feel his hand shaking and both taste and smell the alcohol on his breath. Kakashi was a wreck, and she had no right to play with him just to sate her naïve curiosity.

Slowly he pulled back, removing his hand from where it was now cupping her cheek to grip his glass. She noticed his knuckles turn white as she touched the place he’d kissed her wonderingly.

“Go back to your room,” he rasped, his voice having broken into a hoarse kind of whisper. “And lock your door.”

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Duty Before Honor by Silvershine
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:icon7---videl---7:
your drawings are wonderful! beautiful piece once again that clearly portrays the mood of the extract.
:iconsaminata:
I've read this fanfic it's so wonderful!
And your drawing is great too ^.^

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I support KakaSaku, TobiSaku, ZabuAnko and all the nowhere couples! ^^
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:icontwnj:
I know, iv read it atleast 10 times this year! I usually do this other fic called Tides and Ebbs but the author has just finishes the last chapter so i decided to move on to another fic. But thank you very much!
:icontwnj:
Thank you very much! i know it may not be exactly how others imagined but i do try to create the mood - thank you!
:icon7---videl---7:
no problem, great job =]
:iconezramoon76:
Great pic!:Dloved it!:love:

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A bird does not sing because it has an answer. It sings because it has a song.
:iconkurai-hisaki:
DAMN!
I read Duty before Honor like... 3 times.

Love it.
I think I quoted a line from it from one of my KakaSaku cosplay pictures.

Anyways, great job with the manga strip
I didnt like the mouth as much, and Kakashi could be drawn a bit better - I think the outline around his eye is too thick haha and his eye is a bit weird, but I love how you got Sakura's expression. Sakura's very well done here.

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Sometimes, the little things in life are the ones that matter most . †
:icontwnj:
Thank you! i totally agree. i was trying to do this thing where you couldnt see kakashi's full face, like it was in a shadow or something or covered by sakuras face but it didnt realy come out as well. But yeah iv read it like 10 times, its my fave! im in the middle of The House of Crows - you should read it!
:iconkurai-hisaki:
Ah!
I plan to read that one once it's finished.
I'm not a big fan of reading or watching stuff when it's not done haha.

My patience level is like... 0. lol
I hate cliffhangers and I always feel like throwing stuff when something is exciting and it just ends haha.
My heart can't take it xP

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Sometimes, the little things in life are the ones that matter most . †

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